GREEBO: Hand of death, your Japanese rats

When I'll back from Tokyo for work, campaign on Kickstarter will start. One of the team involved are the Hand of Death. Here complete gallery for base models that need to add lots of other character (surprise left for the campaign, no preview, but amazing model, believe me!) Gallery

Pitch for the Hand of Death (Japanese Rats) available during Kikstarter. Before going on, do you like it or prefer little modify? Maybe some advice for the central square of both part? (the 2 red squares in this pitch)



For advice I'm here!

Gogogo with advice if you have any!

Hello !
About the central squares : maybe it would be better with some japanese character ?
Or some kind of famous "kung-fu" weapon, left here after an epic battle (broken nunchaku or something...)
Or, maybe you could just use a darker stone colour.
The fact is, using this red colour, it looks like if these squares belong to the central red hand.
Nice job anyway !

timbur, waiting for horned frogs' return.

Et pour ceux qui on du mal avec l'anglais, la campagne commence quand?

Quand il reviendra de Tokyo pour le boulot !

Donc on sait pas.

Mamok a écrit:

Et pour ceux qui on du mal avec l'anglais

+1

For me add some détails on the floor.
Remove the red square it's easy to count to six   
Add some broken stones, blood, broken things, a dead skaven ? No i joke for the last.   
The other parts of the field arejust incrédible.
Did i see a pass rule ?

Beautiful pitch.
Red square is a little bit weird. Maybe a red symbol, like a rat skull for example, will be better.
I think the Scatter template misses.

I still have a skaven team, but I think those ratmen would be great with my nippo-goblin team to do a nippo-underworld team. I hope you will put a level in your Kickstarter campaign to do that.

Mamok a écrit:

Et pour ceux qui on du mal avec l'anglais, la campagne commence quand?

Sur le site de Greebo, ils annoncent une absence de fin janvier au 20 février, et un lancement de la campagne à leur retour.

Faut donc imaginer entre le 20 et 25 février...

A scatter (d8) template would be cool, and it could replace the red middle squares while keeping them visible.

A pass ranges chart which actually includes "interceptability" (is that feasible?) would be a nice thing to add.

Beautiful pitch though  .

thanks everybody for your help! the campaign is now LIVE!

here's the link: http://www.indiegogo.com/projects/hand-of-death-rats-and-turtles-miniatures-set/x/833046

I will open a post for any info or help you may need.

pour la dispersion, ce ne serait pas la fontaine à 8 pointes par hasard ?

fana des gobs a écrit:

pour la dispersion, ce ne serait pas la fontaine à 8 pointes par hasard ?

the fountain WILL HAVE the numbers 1-8 to be a scatter template!